F.+Midterm+Essay

Starting from 6th grade to now I have always done my best to be the strongest writer I can be. Even though some of my teachers thought they could have been better people still enjoyed reading them. Now that I am in 11th grade I feel that my writing is stronger than ever. I have applied all of my knowledge in writing and put it in to every one of my papers. I deserve a B on my exam essay because my essay is organized, I know how to stay on topic, and my grammar and word usage is excellent. It is a necessity for every essay to be organized. If an essay is not organized, then it is going to be sloppy and people are not going to want to take the time to read it. My essay includes every component that a persuasive essay needs. These components include an introduction paragraph with a lead, three body paragraphs, a call-to-action, a rebuttal, and a conclusion paragraph. This essay also has a rhythmic flow and goes perfectly together as people read it. An essay would definitely not be organized if its three body paragraphs did not stick with its thesis. My body paragraphs, however, do stay with my thesis. My essay is always on topic. When reading my essay you will notice that it does not switch point o’ views. I am not going to say I deserve a B in one paragraph and then in the next say I deserve a C. While writing my essay I do not get off topic and start talking about things that have nothing to do with why I’m writing this essay. In my essay I portray a strong voice while proving my point on my topic. Grammar and word usage is super important for an essay to be unique and precise. My essay does not include one contraction. Contractions are not proper to use in writing a well written essay. The punctuation is amazing in this essay. Each apostrophe and comma is exactly where they need to be. My word variety is excellent too. If there is not great word variety, then an essay would be boring and dull. Some papers that I have written in the past were not too hot. Even though not all of my papers are great, this essay is definitely way better than a lot. I do deserve a B on my exam essay because I stayed on topic, I had wonderful grammar and word usage, and it was very well organized. I took my time in preparing for this essay and I am very proud of it. Give me a B now because I deserve it for writing this amazing essay.